GranPian's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[[Euphoria] (Quality Edit)]

Not Bad

In fact, I kind of liked it. Its a good soft trance song. You mixed the notes and instruments very well. GOOD JOB! Keep it up. I really love the ending though. Smart idea.

djInTheDark responds:

I'm geussing your talking about the part where all that is left is the bass (in cutoff mode). There actually a story to that one. When I was exporting I accidentally closed the window to early and it cut the last 2 seconds of the song. So had I not done that it would have naturally faded out. But of course I didn't notice it until AFTER I posted it here (the first time) and then when I was reposting it here I remebered not to do that. Well the best things in life are usually accidents. Thanks for the great review!

DJ InTheDark

[:.L.P.: Arabian War]

Awesome

It has that strong ambient techno feel to it. I like it. Sounds like a war to me, like the song from Terminator. Continue with good work.

Lezuch responds:

Thanks Dude

[Madness in the Night]

Medness in the Day is more like it.

Work on how loud your sounds are. And add little more to it than the same beat and a clap. It sounds too repetitive. It gets annoying so mix it up or something like add another melody. Sound Filters would be nice though, like Limiter or somethin.

bigjonny13 responds:

Alright, thanks for the feedback man.

[After the Sex]

Not Bad

I loved the song, I loved the feel, and I loved the title. It was all great except one thing. It needs to be blended all together more. The sounds sound too seperate. The middle sounds on like 1:40 I think isn't bad but I wish it wasn't so hard sounding because after sex, your not hard any more. Your soft if you know what I mean. Now at the end though I like how it continues to repeat but fade out. Nice work though. Keep it up.

MaryLovesJane responds:

LOL Thank you GranPian! I subconsciously knew this was going to come up sooner or later, but I wasn't expecting such an awesome response. I know exactly what you mean. Unfortunately, I made this song on FLStudio8 the demo version, so I wasn't able to save it :( When I exported it, I realized this will make my perception of sex seem like I should be hard the whole time and just walk around with a boner for the rest of my life. Anyway, I'm glad you like it.

[Catching a Cold (DjD)]

Not Bad

It could have been better. I want to name a couple things though, its super loud and the beginning kind of doesn't make any sense to me throughout the song. I am not gonna lie, the drums were pretty good, and the melody was not bad either but it just got too repetitive for me. Try mixing it up a little. Switch some notes around or something. Or make it really spacey and switch the vibes to like an ambient feel. Soften it up a little so I do feel tightened up when I hear it. So good luck on working on future songs with this advice if you take it.

Mad-Muppet responds:

Thanks alot for your criticism! A lot of the things you mention are true, and I'll try to keep them in mind :)

[KH - End of the World remix..]

Very well done

I would have to say this could be better but so far this is a very good remix of this song. You have done well with the different sounds. You kept it with the theme and I liked it. Just clean up on your bass and thats pretty much it. GREAT SONG KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK!

prey2009 responds:

:) thank you m8, Bass is a little off, I can fix it eventually.

[Im Just There]

I voted low for the folowing reason...

Well, its to bland. Add more and don't repeat things so much. Work on your bass. trying using 3xOsc with a compressor filter. works great for basses. Btw another good things to use is WASP, especially a beginner like yourself. Last but not least, use more melodies, not the same one over and over unless its a bass. THey are usually the same. Keep up the work man and you'll get there.

Koolboy00 responds:

Well thank you for telling me your reason...the truth is that i didnt really have enough time for it i finished in 30 minutes

anyway thanks

[Cascade [APEuro]]

Not Bad

Not bad at all. I like it. It's good, clean. only thing that bothers me is the base. And make the little weird keyboard sound a little louder and longer because this a stretched song. In other words, the sounds drag out except the keyboard sound. But great work. Keep it up. Love the melody, goes great for some background music.

APEuro responds:

thanks a lot! I'm not quite sure which sound you are referring to, but thanks for the advice.

[Having a Wild Time (KH1)]

OMG

Oh my goodness, it sounds almost exactly like the game. DUDE THIS IS AMAZING.

Sorrow-316 responds:

i Always Try my Best, Thanks for Reviewing! =)

[{1}3{Bipolar]

Not Bad

Ok everything in the beginning was crap but everything in the middle was awesome. Change your drums a bit like use a deeper bass.

Delmarn responds:

Thanks a bunch for the advice!