GranPian's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[Trance Nation 1]

Not too shabby

i like the tone in all but its too loud. try separating the audio with stereo enhancer. the up beats are not bad but too much the same. try different styles of up beats. Oh and try down beats too. not much of that. Also, its a hard trance song so bass should be harder. Also, on last thing, try fixing the ending. Try a hard ending not a soft ending. it ruins the hard feeling.

[Sunny day!]

AWESOME!!!

Reminds me of Mario sunshine. Great song though. loved it. Great sounds and instruments. XD

[Legend Of Zelda: The Remix]

Love it but one problem

This song is awesome but I had one problem. Theres a couple wrong note to the song. I'm not sure if you did that on purpose or not but it bothers me. Overall great but I really expected it to be longer. Hopefully maybe later on you would make a longer version.

[Rave Till' Morning (loop)]

Not Bad

Its not bad at all. Considering your not the best at this. this i probably a big change in your music and you've gotten alot better. I say just work on the base. Your percussion needs some up beats and down beats, in other words, it needs some reps. i gave you a 5 only because i thought the song was better than a 2.9. Its now a 3.12 but with a little work to the song and learning to make basses and counter melodies will make it sound like at least a 4.

[Journey to Silius M3T4L Mix]

COOL!

Its freakin awesome 8 bit. Your pretty good with 8 bit.

[[Euphoria] (Quality Edit)]

Not Bad

In fact, I kind of liked it. Its a good soft trance song. You mixed the notes and instruments very well. GOOD JOB! Keep it up. I really love the ending though. Smart idea.

djInTheDark responds:

I'm geussing your talking about the part where all that is left is the bass (in cutoff mode). There actually a story to that one. When I was exporting I accidentally closed the window to early and it cut the last 2 seconds of the song. So had I not done that it would have naturally faded out. But of course I didn't notice it until AFTER I posted it here (the first time) and then when I was reposting it here I remebered not to do that. Well the best things in life are usually accidents. Thanks for the great review!

DJ InTheDark

[:.L.P.: Arabian War]

Awesome

It has that strong ambient techno feel to it. I like it. Sounds like a war to me, like the song from Terminator. Continue with good work.

Lezuch responds:

Thanks Dude

[Madness in the Night]

Medness in the Day is more like it.

Work on how loud your sounds are. And add little more to it than the same beat and a clap. It sounds too repetitive. It gets annoying so mix it up or something like add another melody. Sound Filters would be nice though, like Limiter or somethin.

bigjonny13 responds:

Alright, thanks for the feedback man.

[After the Sex]

Not Bad

I loved the song, I loved the feel, and I loved the title. It was all great except one thing. It needs to be blended all together more. The sounds sound too seperate. The middle sounds on like 1:40 I think isn't bad but I wish it wasn't so hard sounding because after sex, your not hard any more. Your soft if you know what I mean. Now at the end though I like how it continues to repeat but fade out. Nice work though. Keep it up.

MaryLovesJane responds:

LOL Thank you GranPian! I subconsciously knew this was going to come up sooner or later, but I wasn't expecting such an awesome response. I know exactly what you mean. Unfortunately, I made this song on FLStudio8 the demo version, so I wasn't able to save it :( When I exported it, I realized this will make my perception of sex seem like I should be hard the whole time and just walk around with a boner for the rest of my life. Anyway, I'm glad you like it.

[Catching a Cold (DjD)]

Not Bad

It could have been better. I want to name a couple things though, its super loud and the beginning kind of doesn't make any sense to me throughout the song. I am not gonna lie, the drums were pretty good, and the melody was not bad either but it just got too repetitive for me. Try mixing it up a little. Switch some notes around or something. Or make it really spacey and switch the vibes to like an ambient feel. Soften it up a little so I do feel tightened up when I hear it. So good luck on working on future songs with this advice if you take it.

Mad-Muppet responds:

Thanks alot for your criticism! A lot of the things you mention are true, and I'll try to keep them in mind :)